Current Cover Page for Music Magazine
The feedback that I received for this product stated that I needed to prevent the over abundance of dead space. It was also suggested that I change the tagline to "EQuality for EDM" which would match the style of my mast head.
Current Contents Page
The feedback for this product included the idea to fill in dead space, use more imagery and also ensure it follows a house style in harmony with the rest of my products, to do this I will most likely completely change the layout of this product in order to follow the conventions of other products in this genre.
Current Double Page Spread
For my feedback of this product I was advised to use more imagery to prevent dead space, also this layout for a double page spread does not follow the conventions of products typical of the genre and so I will completely change the layout and colour scheme in order to follow a complete house style. The font used is also fairly hard to read and so I will change this in a way that it is easily legible and also contributes to the house style.
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